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This is my first Flash movie, so I need some feedback !¡ The plot is up to you !
It had a great feel to it, I must say. The way you made it made it seem relatively simplistic, yet complicated at the same time. not a whole lot of color was used, but you didn't need all that much. The music fit very well with the flash, plus the animation was just great. The shot at the end was pretty cool, though the repeat you did with the zooming out didn't feel right. Besides that great job.
Good for a first flash!
I probally would have done tons worse but still... The whole mostly shadow (black) and light thing looked pretty good but...lol it needs something. The title didnt really go with the flash. I assume you meant what goes around comes around and all that happens in the movie is a guy trys to shoot another guy and eventually does. Has no story what so ever really. The sound wasnt bad it was just average. Thats all ill say about it.
ha ha ha....very funny..... :P
only one thing
the thing is that you need to make it longer, thats all i have to say
Nice style, more details and story would be great.
Its very well done, all you need is more. More of everything. You have a style that's really original, and nice music choice. All you need is a plot.
A look at the first day of Lucina in Super Smash
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