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This is my first Flash movie, so I need some feedback !¡ The plot is up to you !
For a first movie is good....i guess you will get the hang of it with time
its a reasonable movie, alot of questionares are involved but nice colors. and since this is your first flash i would say that you did a pretty good job with it.
It was alright. I was more digging the colours and the stylish camera angles.
Not Bad But Not Good
The Aspect Of Telling The Story Is A Intresting Idea Whith The Silhouettes But The You Lacked In Adding Foot Movement When The Walk Their Is A High Lack Of Audio And Its Quite Short Alright For A First Attempt But Knowone Is Every Perfect On Their First Try So Keep You Head Up And Give It Anthour Shot.
I like the whole silhouette theme but wierd bits n peices of stray animation kept popping up every now and then.
A short film about a park bench
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