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This is my first Flash movie, so I need some feedback !¡ The plot is up to you !
I like it.
The movie is good, I love the music, but it's plot is just weird, snipers usually relocate whether they are failed or suceeded. Anyways really nice for your first movie.
i just couldnt watch all of it.
But it was good for a first animation.
good for the frist but try you best next time...
this was pretty good... i mean
i understood it for the most part
but i think what thru me off the most was that once it loaded
it just started with someone getting shot at
and then ppl moving and then a guy comes into a room with a
gun gets shot at that person misses and then they shot and killed
i mean it was good.. jus really hard to follow all the way i had to really catch it to understand...but good job
the only reason i say this is confusing is becuase if someone didn't see the title, they would have absolutely no idea what the hell was going on. you werent really clear about what was happening, i could only tell cuz the title explained it.
Second-Year Animation Film (2015)
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