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This is my first Flash movie, so I need some feedback !¡ The plot is up to you !
I think this was very good for a first attempt. Even tho it was quite short, it was good for a first try.
Well done keep up the good work.
Someone reviewed this and said in the end it was too boring. He must be right, Columbine was really boring. (Sarcasm) I think you did an awesome job. Things could have been longer, not perfect of course, but it kept me thinking. Alot of people want to forget things like this, and not actually think why it happened or how it could happen so easily again. Well done, keep submitting flash.
Not the greatest
I say, take another shot at it.
I liked it alot it had style I think you should make a sequal that clarifies as to what the fuck is going on like why he was breaking windows and why those guys were shooting it out you know?
I liked it
I beleive it was a good first try and i beleive you have great potental cant wait to see youre next submision
Second-Year Animation Film (2015)
If you try eating the Mouse Cleaning Service, you gonna have a bad time...
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