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A movie about a man who's wife was killed by triads, He must avenge his wife death
its a start
Well it does need some work, some details on the sticks and such would be nice, but other then that it was ok
Keep at it
Very, Very Bad.
I thought this flash had horrible graphics, no plot and horendous sound. It sounded like a 13 year old on the radio and there was too much feedback on the mic. I'd make the flash more smooth and not as chopy. Also, I didn't understand the plot at all. It was just a newspaper with a man with "REVENGE" near him, not very good in my opinion. Keep trying, I know you have some skill at flash.
At least there's an attempt at a plot...
However, maybe it could have been handled better than via 3 pictures (2 of which were flipping about in a really ugly manner).
The same could be said of nearly everything about the movie - you've got good intentions, but you don't really seem to pull it off.
All I can really suggest is that you keep practising and I'm sure you'll improve.
Not bad, but.....
It was so hard to tell who was who and what was going on, although it still was somehow enjoyable
Not just crap.
Well.. the graphics weren't exactly great, and it didn't look as if HUGE ammounts of work had been spent on it.
Still, I somewhat enjoyed watching it.
Keep at it, when you get better at drawing & animating you'll probably end up with something quite cool :)
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