Ok I've been working on this for a bit, and it turned out good, so I hope you like it.
The music is mainly from .hack and the sound effects were grabbed from misc. places. I did all the voices of course (there aren't many =D)
I edited some things, like the smoothness of the sound effects and music cut-offs, and a few other things, and put up the new version. It's not that different, but better, none-the-less. Oh yeah, I put the square in the end scene as well =D