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I tried to use a unique style for this. Have any questions or comments, just write a review. Thanks.
This could use a little work. The story... well there wasn't really a story. Or maybe I just didn't get it. IDK.
However, the style was pretty good and your choice of music rules.
No, no, no...
You can make something better.
Yeah, you're right. I can and I did. And while people are giving advice, here's some for you. Before you go handing out 2's, why don't you actually subject your own flash work to other criticisms?
I like it
You know, this is original. At least it's original. I like the sound too. Don't let the others bother you.
No color, no good sound, and I don't quiet get the story.
Could have added sound
It was lookin... at a . Im sure you could have pulled a 5 or a 6 with sounds and whatnot. Anyways, it was cool. make more!
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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