Be a Supporter!

Credits & Info

Uploaded
Aug 23, 2003 | 2:06 AM EDT

If you liked this, check these out!


Author Comments

It's meant to show the evolution in artistic ability. It was meant to be about badly drawn stickmen coming to life and coming into trouble due to how badly drawn they are. Then an improvement in artistic ability allows them to get further in life.

I totally accept that my own artistic ability at the time didn't allow me to fully express myself and I'll return to this in however many years when I'm good enough to show the story I had in my head.

The first stick-man isn't properly connected, so he falls apart. The 2nd can't stand, due to his wobbly legs. The 3rd seems to be Ok... but what's this! He has no eyes! So he bumps into the tree.

Then, some girls were going to laugh at him and other stuff would have happened, but I got dispirited after showing off this 'work in progress' and it didn't seem worth continuing.

Reviews


SkullkidLinkSkullkidLink

Rated 2 / 5 stars August 23, 2003

Eh...

Well, since it's frame by frame, that's hard so I honor you for that. Otherwise, it's not good. Sorry, but from the looks of it, you could handle a big project with smooth animation easily.


Bezman responds:

Thanks for the honest review. If you'd explained a bit more where I was going wrong and what I could have improved, your review would have been more useful.

I take it by smooth animation you mean motion tweening?

Thanks for the acknowledgement of my efforts. :)


treesunitedtreesunited

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars August 23, 2003

hmm that was sorta bad

but in ur first try by frame.. it pretty good
... i mean i liked it
blast you apple man!!!


Bezman responds:

I'm confused... you give something you like a 1 and something you don't like a 3? Hmmm...

Well, nevermind...