Badly Drawn Stickman by Bezman


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Submitted: 08/23/2003 | 02:06AM EST

File Info: Movie | 361.5 KB | Add Movie to Favorites

Current Score: 3.71 / 5.00

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It's meant to show the evolution in artistic ability. It was meant to be about badly drawn stickmen coming to life and coming into trouble due to how badly drawn they are. Then an improvement in artistic ability allows them to get further in life.

I totally accept that my own artistic ability at the time didn't allow me to fully express myself and I'll return to this in however many years when I'm good enough to show the story I had in my head.

The first stick-man isn't properly connected, so he falls apart. The 2nd can't stand, due to his wobbly legs. The 3rd seems to be Ok... but what's this! He has no eyes! So he bumps into the tree.

Then, some girls were going to laugh at him and other stuff would have happened, but I got dispirited after showing off this 'work in progress' and it didn't seem worth continuing.

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Average Score: 5.1 / 10

Score: 6
XwaynecoltX

"Nice animation"

date: May 20, 2008

~~REVIEW~~
This was a nice little animation, it would be much better with some music in the backround and possibly some color and effects, but other then that it was a nice little animation

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some music and some color or even colored backrounds

~~OVERALL~~
A short animation, nice flow of animation.

~X~

August 5, 2008

Author's Response:

Cheers!

I made it to the sound of 'Ballet Lane', but at the time was worried that Underworld would get annoyed if I used their music.

I realise now I needn't have worried.

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Score: 5
Nobodyjustme

"Let me tell you straight .."

date: January 12, 2008

Man... You got big mistake at the end was nothing .. i just watch that tree ! Just 5 from me :P:P:P

March 12, 2008

Author's Response:

Yeah - it was unfinished. Where that guy disappears is pretty much where I realised I wasn't expressing myself properly.

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sonicx345

"??????"

date: October 25, 2007

what the heck was that all about?seriously?just make it violent or something.i was to bored to watch the whole thing i closed the window at the tree part. i am not trying to be mean but COME ON =)

November 28, 2007

Author's Response:

It saddens me if violence is seen as a necessity.

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Score: 10
mattloaf

"um good :)"

date: October 3, 2007

u 2 below BULLSHIT means bad THAT was GOODSHIT!

November 28, 2007

Author's Response:

was it?

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Score: 8
Poya

"oew"

by: Poya
date: May 2, 2007

i am making a flash movie of my own ''the angry dot'' but DAMN man that is kinda hard but i think i have the hang on it but good.
the movie is good made and it lets you think about life (a little bit) but how did you made the floor? if i do it i am busy for a day or maybe longer!!

March 12, 2008

Author's Response:

4 frames in a single MC. The ground/tree are loops once they're drawn in. Also, use masks.

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