Room to improve.(lots) sorry no offence.
A backround would help the air of violence, ummm..... to help you could try to add more action, everyone dies too quickely.
Good luck with your next flashes!
Good small movie, nice work!
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This time there are two fighters in the arena... but if one defeats the other, he has to take the housemonster on.
Hehe I know its quite short & there isn't much of a story.. But I think its still quite pleasant to look at...
Hmm I think I'm finally getting the hang of flash...
If you people like the style of this one, let me know and I'll make more...
Enjoy!
-serge-
FireHound responds:
No need to apologise, I'm always up for some constructive criticism :)
Very nice
I thought it was ok, You played around with some special fx i see.. Well done, a background could of helped a score a bit higher, or even maybe better music, the music didnt really suit.. make it like grunge or heavy stuff because usually that says its like umm hard to explain but like proper fighting if ya catch me, but better luck next time.
FireHound responds:
thanx for the advice
eh...
Ok this was OK...all you need is some background and a very good story line and you could make a really good flash movie...hit me up sometime i might b able to help.... AOL: you suck bich
FireHound responds:
thanx
Uhm.....
If that had sucked any harder than I might've cried. Yet since it did have Marilyn Manson's Fight Song along with it, I'm not going to blam it the way I really want to...
FireHound responds:
awwww how nice
Might rival Xiao Xiao...
Let me tell you about Xiao Xiao. It's 10x better then your crap, has bearly any plot, and a huge fight scene. go to the Xiao Xiao section of newgrounds, watch either #3 or 4, then learn from it.
FireHound responds:
Xiao Xiao is just one of the most famous flashes ever... Of course I know it... and...
"It's 10x better th'A'n your crap, etc..."
and still you're giving me a 9?
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Daily 5th Place August 18, 2003