This is my first animation, I would like to hear some feedback so I can improve. The subject of this is online persona development. I'm just getting a feel for the programs, but rest assured that once I do something better will be on its way.
Thank you and Enjoy!
UPDATE*~*
Wow, it survived. Thank you, I will be fixing the preloader problem. This is the begining. I will be making some better soon. Thank you all once again.
good start
It was a pretty good promotion of a story or game, I'm not sure which you are going for. Some of the script didn't come in to focus very fast, but then disappeared very quickly before I had a chance to read it. Also, it seemed like a big point of the movie was to use as many different ways of bringing writing up. Just pick two or maybe even three that you like best, and just use those. Over all, not too bad though.
Catchy A commercial of some sort, PreView?
This is nice is sounds like a good storyline to a Good Book or TV Series, MAKE MORE darnit ill be waiting For the next. There BETTER BE A NEXT!
Kinda Good
The sounds great, the animation is smooth, it could make somthing big if you work on it. There is no real purpose for this 'cept if its a preview.Make 'em good
Could be good
You need to let your words and pics stay just second longer, you can't really take it all in. But just throw some purpose and story in there, and hopefully your animation skills will be good enough. Good luck.
Sooo.... what is this supposed to be? really?
Ok it was not too bad I liked the cool use of text and some fading images (the chick sucked, too pixilated). However I was making a false assumption that the kikass beginning would actually lead up to something, when it became apparent that your text animations were all you had I no longer wanted to watch your little fake exiting catch phrases and complain about how the download was a waste. Why would I want to see this? it has no substance and only makes some vague references that honestly could be put in front of nearly ANY noir movie. I would have given it a five but since this is your first time I'll show you mercy so you can learn the ropes. If your gonna make something make it have a purpose. You didn't even say what this is a trailer for!