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okay this is the updated version of _The Hit_. I've changed alot on this so i think it deservs a new entry. again, if there is anything i can improve, please tell me so that i can make a better version
Good Jokes, Poorly Executed
You had a few funny jokes in there, but I had to watch the movie twice to really catch them. Give time for a joke to happen.
Oh yeah! I like this a lot better than the last one, also you asked for my e-mail last time so you could e-mail me when you make The Hit 2!!! well althougth it is in my profile its...
i'll marked it up 1 for the extra effort, then i marked it down 1 for not quite making "a final"
here's a few tips for your next sequence;
- music with intro text (and a skip button also!)
- if this was already a series we'd know who "uber-001" dude is, and not konfuze him with the "pimp" dude.. (the intro gives us an expectation we'll get a camera shot of our leading soldier 1st) ..but instead, we start not knowing who we're watching.. by the end we know who's who, but then we have to watch it again to follow the plot or get the joke. Sure, it soundslike a fine detail, but why else would you need an intro text anyway? ;0)
The 1st hit was very well done!, i especially liked the improved version! I hope to see a sequal!
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Nice worl, started to get abit static on the launcher and the explsion, nice black n white style, he seemed to be a bad shot, hehe, well it was amusing and short, but hope to see more soon, nice work...
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