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This is the first time I tried doing a Flash like this. This isn't a trailer or anything, but I'm going to do movies in this style, progressing in quality as time goes on. Give me some criticism and some advise on how to make it better. Enjoy.
Not Your Best Piece, But It is Fine
The best part about this video was the music, but the rest was a bit amusing. The video was very short as well. You could improve this.
A kick in the chest isn't exactly deadly, but whatever. The 3D models were good, but you could make it longer. Then the wait for it to load would be worth it.
3 seconds of animation, and over 2 megs? This is crap. The 3-D models were superb, but good god, make it longer than 3 seconds. And try to compress this file more, given the length.
Wow. Is that character your own? If so, he looks great. This was way to short. I would of been happy if he would of done a few moves, or even walked. Future episodes should be episodes, and not profiles.
That's what I'm planning, the next episode is being worked on, but should be done in little than a month.
It will include a story and an excrusiatingly long, but not boring, torturing and death.
That was the stupidest fucking thing i've ever seen
(Gasp) WOW, a critic that has NO Flash. F-U-C-K O-F-F!
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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