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Osiris Trailer

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Aug 8, 2003 | 1:56 AM EDT

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Hey everybody, this is my first flash movie that I've done. It is the Osiris Trailer for my upcoming series. It's not totally complete, I just thought I post it to see your guys opinion if it is worth making a series. I will be uploading a better movie called Osiris with stick figures...........Enjoy! (btw, credits to polykarbon for the city pic!)

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Shot-CallaShot-Calla

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

well it wasnt bad

if you probably had added more to this flash this probably would have made first page but not bad at all



CosmetorCosmetor

Rated 2 / 5 stars

That was it?

Normally, a trailer is supposed to TELL you something about the movie. The information contained in this trailer is:
1: The movie involves a city.
2: There is a hero in the movie.
3: The hero's name is Johnny Flash.
4: The author doesn't know how to spell Johnny.
5: The hero has visual and auditory sensors, a.k.a eyes and ears.

No plot details, no backstory, no other characters, nothing. Some USEFUL information would improve your score. Right now, the ONLY good thing is the art style; everything else is supposed to be informative but is actually useless. Due to extreme lack of content, I'm giving you a 2 out of 5.

Next time you make a trailer, try actually TELLING us about the movie it's for.

Don't take this as an insult to you personally, just at an insult to your skill at making trailers.



chimpmaster20992000chimpmaster20992000

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Dude that was pretty cool.

Yah you should work on the characters a little more but naw dude i think the music was cool and it seems like its going to be good they and wats the name of the song?



romexonxfireromexonxfire

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

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more goober anime. put a little more work into the character. and change the horrible music. everyone is a master of hand to hand combat and espionage. ugh..



matman86matman86

Rated 5 / 5 stars

please finish....

that was very bad ass! you had me on the edge of my seat! damn it! it looks very bad ass! very nice animation, i like thae character and all the details you have in there. and i understand where you are coming from on posting it up b4 it's done. i do that alot too. i want people's opinion and i get excited so i post it. things to do with that though? hmmm.... well obviously you have told a lil bit of the story, so when the song reaches that peak like that, BIG fight scene! let it go on for a tid bit, then say something like who his enemy is, or what not, and then show a kind of descreate picture of the main badguy, then cut into some other text like," now he must find the source and destroy it!" or something like that, then have a bunch of fast paced action scenes and then wrap it all up and end it and tell when you think it will be ready by, then the credits! i hope this helps you out some, maybe get your mind realing or something. e-mail me sometime at
pacmansk8er61086@yahoo.com. tell me how the movie is going and if you need any pointers. laters
-matman- p.s. check out some of my movies, they are alot like yours.