its OK

YOU SHOULD ANIMATE IT MORE it is good but needs a lt of improvement

Creative ploy

I like the storyline here, it seems like a Halloween feeling little story, he finds a sandwich only to discover it has been cursed and will kill anyone that pisses it off or tries to eat it anywhere at any time of the year. The art could have probably done a little better but aside from that it was a very nice little tale that you created, very nice job there.

SCTE3

3/5

I really liked the beginning but then it got a little dull. The sandwhich with the nun-chuks was probably the funniest part lol. The plot needs work though and the animation was a little slow at times. However, nice work man!

((( IT WAS FUNNY )))

It was funny but still needed more, it needs animation, and more detail like in the backrounds, funny though...

MOVIE COMMENTARY: Lacks animation, contains humor...

~X~

umm....

It wasn't awful, but at least try to be a little more clever next time...Jeez, you could have at least said it was "Deviled Ham"