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I appreciate all the reviews, even the not so good one, I'm working on two new animations right now, the follow up episode might be the last though.
The graphics were very good. But i'm a little confused about the story...
anyway... there were minor problems with the voiceovers. The "doofy-sounding" one had a good voiceover. The main character's voice-over sounded very low quality; it sounded like he was mumbling. And that last guy (the one who threw the dart at the main character's knife) didnt have a voiceover at all. As a matter of fact... there were no voice-overs from that point. You should either have EVERYONE with voice overs and NOBODY with voice overs because if you it for some and none for others, it just seems disordered.
There is a bit of the "cool-factor" in the fighting, but there isn't enough, try working on more action and not using "well, thats what you get for 428.2 Kbs" as an excuse...
And that part about "if you say something kool about my animation, i'll add you to the ending credits of my next animation" you written as the "author's comment". This sounds like a very desperate and very cheap way to get better reviews...
excellent graphics!!!! i think the action was good as well, who cares if it's not every-second-packed-with-tenseness-and-blood type action. it was a bit weird how one guy talked and the others didn't, also that guy was just completely out of the whole vibe of the movie. i just hope he gets killed in the other one *cackle*
Finish this man!!!
this was really tight. animation rocked, it looks like it was done by a manga artist. movement was also smooth, proportions were great, as well as shading.
the only thing that you need to adress is probably the voice acting.. some characters had no voice, while others did (the main character didnt..?)
but i was expecting NON-STOP ACTION. Not some insanly stupid humor. If you want to make a funny ninja movie, be a LOT more funny.
Finish this! Finish this!!!!!!!!!
That is a superb piece of work, I want to see the ending as soon as possible! Some fantastic graphics, some of the best I've seen on the portal, some nice sound samples in use as well. It probably would be better if you showed us the whole thing in one go, but hey, that's your choice. Nice work.
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