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I appreciate all the reviews, even the not so good one, I'm working on two new animations right now, the follow up episode might be the last though.
A good effort!
You obviously put a lot of effort into this and it shows with the quality of your work! Your sense of storyline could use some polish though. Pick better places to pause than a goon fight. A better spot would have been "But they won't be a problem", then cut with him in mid-air.
That way you would start the next episode with a cool fight, leading up to Basura's confrontation (Another good cut spot).
All in all, you're doing great! My only suggestion is to control your storyline. You might want to try storyboarding the whole thing first.
I'm going to give you a 10 because of the effort you obviously put into it...
But I was hoping so much to see your character take out all the bad guys.
I understand it was small movie size but I would've liked to see more then 2 guys get killed.
that was pretty good
like to see part 2
i hate that u cant draw
u obviosly have some flash skills so come up with something that isnt stupid manga like every other person on this site. sorry im drunk
it was great, I got into the film and the only thing that I hated was having to wait for the sequal!
A short film about a park bench
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