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This is my third movie so please be critical and i'll try and get better also any help tips or otherwise would be appreciated.
you need sound.
cheers for stating the obvious.
what the fuck! jesus christ that was crap, even jesus had a more creative death.
Cheers pal. Oh and F*** you too.
It was cool, but theres one problem.. try to make the mouths good and u might come up on top 20.
Cheers and i know my weak areas, and i hope too be in the top 20 soon.
It needs work but its good enough
Dude you have to remake this. As far as your third flash goes Im too impressed. But it still needs work especially in the sounds department. Like a stab n groan sound during the door scene n such. Voices would help too and the animation is fine just try and smooth it out a little if you can. You got a really good flash on your hands man just remake it and submit it as a remake and see the better reaction ^_^ Gl in the future dude
Thank you very much for the review and your suggestions will be taken very seriously.
this is good
but still two things
-download preloader here on newgrounds
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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