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This is my third movie so please be critical and i'll try and get better also any help tips or otherwise would be appreciated.
be critical? ok
it sucked a bit with the lack of sound and the lack of overall effort with the drawings. when the guy was meant to be pleading for his life, he looked as if he couldnt give a crap.
y did the assasin from 'the government' have red eyes? had he been smoking weed? how can he jump off a cliff? and y does he have the wolverine claws? if i was going to do something like this, id make it more belevable.
if u wanna take someone out (and u are in the government), send in a fully kitted out swat team to bust a cap in all their asses. and tell the press they were terrorists plotting to blow something up when they ask
Well i did ask and cheers for being honest, i know it lacked a real plot but thats ok im just begining too make flash.
spend some more time on this stuff
Work on actual voices. If not, then at least use decent punctuation. Oh, and one last thing... I don't care who you are.... NOBODY TAKES A DAMN SHOTGUN BLAST TO THE CHEST AND LIVES!!! If he is an assasin from the government, give him like a couple of side knives at his belt or something. Maybe even a katana blade. Leave the claws for wolverine.
Why thank u for the suggestions, and i dont care if you dont like the "Wolverine" blades but they are not wolverine blades he has 3 blades my character has 2.
I didn't like this at all
The graphics were ok in this movie. The animation and sound were poorly done though. What is up with the story? Worst ever. You didn't explain why the "government asassin" was there. Also, the peoples' mouths did not move and they had no expressions.
Thanks for the constructive criticism.
why did the shotgun have rifling
had nothing interesting at all except a wolverine complex.
damn good for an early flash!
for a new up and coming flash artist, you sure do put a suprising level of effort into it! great work buddy! attention to detail shown its just a shame you didnt add more sound and perhaps background music
Thanks a lot for the review qand my next movie will be better.
A short film about a park bench
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