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This is my third movie so please be critical and i'll try and get better also any help tips or otherwise would be appreciated.
it was pretty chill. Liked it a lot. need some music or something. but i actually sorta liked the quietness of it, it made it a little more scary. this might have been a mistake that worked to your benifit. This was good. You wann know why? BECAUSE I SAID SO
Thanks for the review, i considered music, but i didnt find any decent enough.
add music and have a way to tell whos talking very
interesting good flash
Cheers i'll consider it for my next animation.
An A&E biography is more entertaining!!!
I dont want to be mean... well, hell ya i do. but i wont. this sucked, and bad!!!! The graphics were lame, horibly put together, and in dire need of photoshop, the sound was gut wrenching, and the dialoge was special ed. material. but i have to give you props on the plot and theme, cuz i just like assasin flicks. so next time, concentrate and take your time.
Well fuck you very much for the review, i appreciate the review but couldnt you have been a bit more helfull ?
normally i would say the was fucking horrable.. but compared to the rest of the shit on here its above 50%... good work
Cheers, i dont know if thats a compliment or what.
Just finish it.
All this movie needs is a little improvement in some areas, like it's kinda hard to tell who's talking wen there's multiple people in a room. Some creepy music is a must as it would add to the atmosphere and mood. And maybe some better sound effects.
Thanks for the help i do need it i did think about music but, im way to dumb to do it good maybe in my next movie.
Feeling sorry for yourself doesn't get you anywhere...
First episode: Trolls attack the village and heroes come to defend it.
A short animation about Journey
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