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This is my third movie so please be critical and i'll try and get better also any help tips or otherwise would be appreciated.
if only i could do flash movies....
Well done again...I reall like the style...you did really well considering your 3rd flash hope to see more of your work
Thanks alot, i appreciate the review mate. I too hope i submit more flash, its just a pain in the arse getting started again :)
What... the crap?
First things first... Graphics = trash
Now that that's taken care of, everything else was pretty well done.
A decent storyline, some alright sounds.
Some violence, finally! Not particularly funny, but it's still pretty good.
You got some talent, you're just graphically challenged :\.
Hmm being called graphically challenged by a guy with no flash submitted to NG, thats irony for you.
You're a decent Flash artist and I sort-of enjoyed your movies that I saw!
After flaming you on the NG Forums I thought I'd check to see whether your Flash work was good... turns out it was. I'm obliged to review it fairly - anyway... I think this movie was good, I dind't mind the graphics, the animation was decent and your concepts are fairly flawless (good imagination equals a great flash artist if they get the skills down... that is something I tend to lack, as well as the skills of course.)
Erm, the only thing I'd suggest is that you include a more substantial SFX backing, perhaps more appropriate sound effects, an eery background loop. Obviously don't carry on with this project but think about doing more for your next one.
Ok... now that's out the way, back to contempt.
Well you are the last person i expected to see here. But i can see your a decent guy so i wont start again. This animation i considered my worse, i thought my other ones would have got a better score. This was flung together in about a week and a half, and the sound effects are terrible. Ive learned alot from then, i think that was my second submission, im not sure i dont have the .Fla anymore. Thanks for the suggestions and review.
I thought it was ok.
I thought that it sucked until the assasin cut the dude's head off. In fact, thats the only part I enjoyed
Well atleast you bothered to tell, which i thank you for.
Hey, that's a pretty good movie. The animation was very smooth. In future films though, if you don't put in voice acting, and use text, put a little tick mark, or an arrow to indicate who's talking. That part with the assassin talking to the guy at the end got a tad bit confusing. Nice work though! I hope to see new submissions from you soon!
Thanks for the review. Ive contemplated using voices in my aniamtions for a while, its just well, i have a shite acting voice ;) Thank you very much.
A short film about a park bench
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