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This is the first movie i had record myself and i don't think you will understand am i saying so here it is: "freeze!".
((( FUN )))
Haha this was cool, more of a story here, the characters are cool, could use some work though, i like how you always add good detail to the backrounds, and funny music, allthough the mic seemed abit scratchy, nice flash though, keep up the good work...
Hehe thanks!! I even wrote in the comment what i recorded in my stupid microphone haha...
Needed to be longer. This is too sort I do not see how it is reaching the point it is trying to make. Plus when the body hits the car could have been done better. More of a loud crash with glass and metal sounds. need to work on the sound if that was freeze being said.
Haha yeah well about the recordation i have now a 20 times better microphone hahah...
But it wasnt like a project or so, just like something fun to make, hehe.. So i didnt search all over million sites for sounds and all that... :P
Graphics wernt so great, but oh man the humour and random style of this was great! Despite its simplicity you managed to do enough to last me a flahs that was 5 minuets less, I normally find that the shortest flashes are usually the best becuase you manage to cram so much good quality into one short flash without repeating yourself a lot :)
First off like I said the graphcis werent so good but the content was what mattered here, I found the whole stupid cop theme so funny and true of course! You also used lots of ironic jokes in here that are well known and are usually used in Loony Tunes and things like that - for example when the guy was falling he landed on the car in a mangled mess instead of on top of the actual cop like expected. and the fact when the cop said 'Freeze' (and not very clearly too, you might want to sort that out) the falling man actually froze up like a popsicle on his word! Oh the irony muahaha xD I also found the Irish music hilairous and appropriate here unot only is irish music always funny because its so bouncy, but also (and not being offensive to any irish people, its a view there's normally carry) that there is the typically stereotypical view that if someone is stupid they are 'Irish'. hey its not my view but its a stereotypical one so it was hilarious.
All in all a nice light hearted piece to get me started, well done :)
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Hahahaha thx agian T_c!
Looney Tunes is one of the shows/movies you are growing on - and bases your humor on them! Hahah, thx for the info you putted here ;D! (:)
pretty good i think
i dont see anything bad or someone blaming it because it is bad.......the only thing i see wrong is that it is short u keep it up and ohhh i like the south park stuff u made and also i like the linkin park video.. make more stuff man and i will support you!
Hahahaha thx alot tommy_skelton!! (;)
very deserving 7 overall. In fact, that was quite good/funny. Work on your transition and movement, but it was a nice short. Congrats!
Hehe thanks!! I think something like 10 shorts like this one as one movie can be great, eh?
(lol you cant respond, just telepaticly tell me the answer ;D)
Featuring Epic Voice Guy
A big head dog auditions to be the mascot of some commercials.
Detective Nwar flashes back to his days as a police officer.
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