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This is my first real attempt at making a flash movie, hope you enjoy it. Leave a review to help me out for the next movie.
Update: I included a few things that people suggested, still basically the same.
It was't THAT bad, cmon
For a first flash, it was good. You had good drawings and flowing movement, unlike many other "first flashes" out there. Now you just need to work a bit on preloaders and you're all set to start making lots of good flash! (less clicking too >_>)
too much clicking
the only part i liked was when the pink guy said "what are you looking at" because you didnt have the click the next button.
Pretty Ironic how the flash itself ponders the aspects of quality flash...but i didn't like the pink dude...he was mean.
I'm sure he doesn't like you either. Glad you picked up the topic though.
excellent premise for a first flash movie
For a first submission that was pretty darn good. Not to mention the subject was perfect. I like this one, but I don't know why. Keep it up.
Thanks man, I'm glad someone got it.
could be better
Decent graphics, it would be a lot better if you knew how to tell a story.
Okay I'll learn how too tell a story then.
After being exiled, the mysterious "Valdoros" must contend with home invaders
Tape One of a pixel animated Horror anthology series.
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