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The sequel/prequel to "The Mourner," my first flash movie. I had loads of fun making this and I hope y'all have as much fun watching it. Enjoy! ^_^
you should be ashamed of yourself! this is too vioelent and chiledren use this website!!!!
One of my favorites on New Grounds after all these years.
its made with the sideshow transition animation formula
i like the continuity and the story line is generic but quite good
Amusing, but needs more.
I am generally not a fan of these types movies but it had some un-expected movie fun and some nice visuals. It turned out to be actually fairly enjoyable. I appreciate you looking for originality in your work as this seemed like it. so great movie entry here. Alright this was kind of nice, the "MUSIC" was nice but kind of scratchy, and there was not much here, also this "LOOPS" so you may want to add a stop action code to stop that looping also some sort of dialog would also be great, but other then that this was an alright flash movie. It's Flash movies like this that makes me realize it's a great site and a great upload you have here, it's decent in its own right. but it's actually not that bad. It reminds of some good quality, flash that i may have seen before, with a little buzz to it.
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There are a few Things to take a second look at, and i will get to those, but i would like to take this time to suggest a few ideas, maybe some advice and so on, and i hope you use it to the best of your knowledge. You could place a STOP-ACTION-CODE it will help for the looping that the flash does, it will make it so that the user presses play and at the end replay, you will also need the propper "PLAY" and "REPLAY" buttons aswell, feel free to stop by the "FLASH" Forums on the newground BBS as they will help you on how to add this script into your flash. Also if you do a search on the newgrounds flash games, for Stop action code you will turn up a bunch of tutorials on it and how to do it aswell as other great flash tutorials and how to do's good luck. Needs a tad more detail and such. add some dialog some more scenes with more character talking and so on going on.
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