Pretty funny.
It was good for a laguh or two. If the voices were better, and a little work on the animations, i would give this a SOLID FIVE! Work on it, remake, resubmit.
Author Comments
i think its good.. but tell me your thoughts, i will add a loader on it soon.. so dont blam it for that.. just tell me what i need to work on in the movie, thanx
its better but not great
ok i take back most of the things i said about you being gay and your tlent as a cartoonest but you seriosly need a better ending k
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uhhhh....
that sort of confused me. HAVE AN ACTUAL ENDING.
Looks good, but...
You breathed on the mike too much, and it was cheesey, too cheesy. The acting wasn't good. Keep the video professer idea, but a better joke.
What to work on
No cheesy voices. Compress it better, and add some more content to the infomercial (make it longer) and on the subject, you could break into the "Fire Water Burn" chorus (You know that song by Bloodhoung Gang, right?)
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3.15 / 5.00
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