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this is the first installment in a series of shorts starring paco.
Definately needs some work
I'm just going to go down the list of suggestions.
First, your graphics were on the sloppy side. I liked the "old silent movie" style and look, but your framerate was too low for a stop-motion animation like this; try to get more frames in. The objects you pasted in and manipulated were also cheesily done. Try to make it so that the sketchy "old" look doesn't stop when you're manipulating an object separately from the rest of the video.
Also, keep the text on-screen longer. Not that I'm amazing or anything, but my reading speed is definately above average, and I could barely read all the text before the screen advanced. Finally, even if it seems like a good idea, I would advise AGAINST allowing the viewer to manually advance the text, since I feel doing so would detract from the overall style. Personally, I'd give 2.5 seconds per sentence to the text screens. If that seems short or long, tweak it from there.
Yeah keep trying and improving. You have some great movements if they were smoother.
I can't say the loading time was worth the wait for the length of the film, but I can see some potential! This is really different than a lot of things than I have seen, good luck with it, and keep working on it.. i'm sure this will rock when you get more done.
W00t! More Paco! I want to see the next episode!
I -very much- love your movies, can't wait to see more of your work.
I like it!
Paco! Please! make more movies! This was hilarious! I really liked it, mainly because I know the creator, both in a personal and in a physical way. PACO!!!!! His name sounds like taco, and tacoes are good, so therefore paco is as good as a taco. It rhymes, so it must be true. I hope for more Paco adventures in the future, maybe more funny, even tho it is still hilarious. The whole skecthy, jumy animation makes it look so budget, but budget is good in these crazy days of big business, mega-blockbuster movies, and Harry Potter. Budget is good, and so is Paco.
Keep on rockin' in the free world, and Doo doodle doo doo ....
Chaos:That was so bad even my computer screwed up after it was over. try harder man.
Lori:well i'm usualy the one to agree with Chaos but I myself actualy thought it wasn't TO bad for a beginer.remember practce makes perfect.
like i said in my description its the first installment so it wont make too much sense right now, i have many ideas for this series, check out my other paco video lost hat, its a little better
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