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if I get enough good reviews I will make more I probably will make more anyway.
I liked it man, i dont know what the other guy was talking about.
I see alot of potential, and you look like you know what you're doing.
Yeah i look forward to seeing more from you, maybe a longer piece.
I liked it, i really did, good going man.
(my favorite part from that scene was when he's like "my turn" and he flew up and dodged the bullets, cant wait to see how the boss uses his robotic arm shooter!)
i'll be blunt.
that was horrible.
You've definitly got a lot of potential here. Here's the scoop:
- Your drawing skills mixed with the 3D effects were great, nice idea
- I see potential for a good plot, but since it's a trailer, it's not gone into much depth. If you go in depth for it in the future, it'll be great
- You could have added more to the backgrounds in most scenes. Especially the "Bring it on" scene.. but I assume it is missing because it's a trailer
- Sounds. If there was voices, and a more suiting background song, it would've been much more impressive.
In the full version, I hope to hear voices, cool sound effects, and full blown backgrounds. With your talent with animation, I'm assured it will be a great animation.
Looking forawrd to it!
~ NW.oYm-NO ~
i liked it but it coped the main concept off of spawn and his cape to boot: spawn was killed and came back for revevenge ( brief summary ) he had face similar to yours but with whit repplacing the black face paint and moves the same way to. other then the similarities it was ok
good ideas, good use of (virtual) camera angles, but your animation skills are a little on the shit side. I would try getting into real life movie making, and givin' that a go.
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While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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