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~Good~
Lots of great things about this flash mainly the voice acting that was really nicely done and really added effect to the comedy in the flash. The quality of animation was quite good and made it really obvious as to where the setting was, which was hilarious by the way. The timing was alright, the comedy was quite good though my favorite part is when the one sperm says "I'm going for it!" and he flies into the giant pile of...well you know. A great ending to the flash as well keep up the great work.
~Improve~
In some parts the animation needed some tidying up like when the shit outbursted at them coming out it didn't make much sense because it was a little sketchy. Also the timing could have vastly been improved this was more of a comedy short than anything. A funny point to prove although the beginning could've pointed out some characters.
~Overall~
Keep up the nice work there Edmund you've got some quite funny stuff here a great flash to watch with a very funny point just needs a little more effort put into it.
Haha very good point there. And for all gay lovers out in the review lines, you can have anal sex with a woman too assholes! Stop pointing fingers at the first oppertunity you get! If it was a homophobic message, then deal with it. Have you ever heard of freedom of speach? No? Then look it up in your god damn law book and see what it means!
Reviews
Rated 5 / 5 stars October 8, 2012
Hahaha, Edmund you are awesome!
Rated 5 / 5 stars August 8, 2012
Don't knock it until you try it.
Rated 3 / 5 stars October 26, 2011
Hilariously Disturbing
~Good~
Lots of great things about this flash mainly the voice acting that was really nicely done and really added effect to the comedy in the flash. The quality of animation was quite good and made it really obvious as to where the setting was, which was hilarious by the way. The timing was alright, the comedy was quite good though my favorite part is when the one sperm says "I'm going for it!" and he flies into the giant pile of...well you know. A great ending to the flash as well keep up the great work.
~Improve~
In some parts the animation needed some tidying up like when the shit outbursted at them coming out it didn't make much sense because it was a little sketchy. Also the timing could have vastly been improved this was more of a comedy short than anything. A funny point to prove although the beginning could've pointed out some characters.
~Overall~
Keep up the nice work there Edmund you've got some quite funny stuff here a great flash to watch with a very funny point just needs a little more effort put into it.
-TY Reviews
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars June 20, 2011
haha!
Haha very good point there. And for all gay lovers out in the review lines, you can have anal sex with a woman too assholes! Stop pointing fingers at the first oppertunity you get! If it was a homophobic message, then deal with it. Have you ever heard of freedom of speach? No? Then look it up in your god damn law book and see what it means!
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars June 3, 2011
haha
I agree with LittleLuckyLink lol its all so clear now that Im a teenager.