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Time Bomb ep 4

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This is the last episode of chapter 1. a chapter in this series means the adventure being taken. this concludes the adventure of Dark Entity. the next chapter will be better. every chapter will have 4 eps in them. ENJOY!!!!

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iunno but it was kinda gay but hey thats my opinion.

Need to work on the graphics.

Though the story was pretty interesting this time around. I gotta see episode 5.

Not bad

I'm not giving you 0 cause you're a begginer and I think you will mature and develop in due time, keep up the work, start working on texturing characters, drawing more detailed backgrounds and compressing the audio, also, less text! Try to think out your story in a short effective way, in fact draw it out on pages of paper, put in the dialog and edit out the words that you don't need after its all done, this will make the story clear as crystal ball.

Cheers!

Maxacutioner responds:

Sorry about the so much text. i just like to look at Time Bomb as almost a book. A thing out of history showing what happened. The stuff i explained in the typing could not have been shown unless it would give away something. Sorry though. thanks for being nice and not wanting to like, give me a zero and stuff.

:-D

I am in love with Time Bomb

Hey man, I have been following Time Bomb ever since it made it's portal debut a few days ago! I think you have a good style of art and animation, and look forward to seeing your work in the future! Keep up the good work man! Don't let low ratings keep u down, these people just don't care enuf to look past the "different" art and animation style! Plus, 2 of my movies I thought were cool got blammed, and so far I don't think any of ur Time Bomb series have gotten blammed! Thats pretty good considering u have no other submissions! Well, thats about it, I guess... Peace out and keep up the good work!

Maxacutioner responds:

Dude, wow, cool thanks!!!!

VOICE ACTING....

is very important buy a freaking mic.

Maxacutioner responds:

i'm thinking about that but i dont really have time.

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