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This is a beautiful story that brings a tear to the eye. I hope you enjoy it as much as I am proud of it, and thanks for the encouraging votes!
depending on the release time, 4 starts, i like it.
the lines of dialogue were well done
maybe it could have been animated better but it was ok
Nice story and very good animation and music choices, the drawings could have been a little better, but I can tell you put a good effort into making this, there were also some typos, like where you spelled heinous, but meant highness, as in king, other than that, nice work, and you did a good job with this.
The story wasn't TERRIBLE. You were better off taking a slideshow/storyboard route. The art is well below worthy of even animating. You should take some time to practice the wonders of Flash.
For some real weird reason, nto sure why, but I thought this flash was actually pretty cool. There was little animation, and you faded in and out way more than you should have for a flash of that length, but the story was pretty good. You should've shown a lot more animation in between all the fades and it would have been better. The graphics weren't terrible and the music fit in very wll. No voices, but they weren't very necessary.
ASTEROID HURLING TOWARDS EARTH!!!
tasty crunch of yummy cookie crumble
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