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This is a pretty good animated flash, I hope you guys like it its our first! yes i know were noobz :p
-I fixed the sound glitch in this movie so it works perfectly. Notify me of any more glitches. And remember, this is my first movie.
this the worst flash evr!!
I liked it, but one thing I noticed was that the subtitles went too fast. Here's a trick: always take longer than you think you need, or get someone else to read them. Since you know what they say, you can read them really fast.
It was alright, I dont really prefer this kind of animation but I liked it. One thing though, you could have at least chosen faces that matched the people, I almost never knew who was talking. Like Doctor Doom with the face of Ganondorf?
Streight down the middle...
You have talant, I for one don't really like sprite flashes but, you seem to have skill that needs to be polished up a little bit. Don't worry as you work with flash a little more, your skills will get better. Keep Trying! Don't give up!
I believe unimpressive pretty much sums it up. I'll admit that I'm a little demanding, but I am nonetheless a good critic. Despite the facts that most of the movie was simply characters standing in front of a background with text, the story wasn't enticing, the music was bland and let's not forget the ridiculousness of how they fell to the ground, I still believe that it could have potential. You can do better. It takes practice. Don't let what people say in these reviews discourage you. The only reason they're saying such crude things are because they're true. What I'm saying is your first movie is full of shit. But your second? That's entirely up to you.
- Good luck.
Thank you for the constructive critisicm. Yes, KJS: Episode 2 contains more action (Episodes 2 & 3 are already made) so you have more to look foward to.
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
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a clock day story
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