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GOD, THIS MOVIE SUCKS! MY CPU WAS ALL MESSED UP AND KEPT GLITCHING WHICH MADE IT HARD TO DO ANYTHING! KEEP IN MIND THO,IM STILL NEW TO FLASH 4.
i know physics dont apply in cartoons
but its unlikely a child of that size could knock a human head clean off with one punch
maybe break a neck if he was exceptionally strong
the voices were good
your computers inadequacy crippled your animating ability according to what you said in the authors comments
the short story was ok but the art was a bit to simplistic
the drawings are kinda shitty but it matches up with the kids theme here. I though it was a funny short though and that aspect of psychology really is counterintuitive, funny flash man.
Wow, this was a pretty weird flash, and far too slow-paced for what it was. The graphics weren't terible, and th evoices weren't too bad, but th delays between the voice overs was hard to deal with. It seemed to really drag on, and the flash basically just bored me. Plus there wasn't really a background most of the time.
((( NEEDS WORK )))
First of all the "LOOPING" gets anoying, may want to fix that, second it doesnt make much sense, all i heard was the one scream which was not that good to start off with, and the art was very sloppy, could use some refining...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
There are lots of things to work on, better practice with making "CHARACTERS" aswell as some better use of colors and backounds, also give it some story with subtitles incase people cant understand the "AUDIO"...
You could place a "STOP-ACTION-CODE" it will help for the looping that the flash does, it will make it so that the user presses play and at the end replay, you will also need the propper "PLAY" and "REPLAY" buttons aswell, feel free to stop by the "FLASH" Forums on the newground BBS as they will help you on how to add this script into your flash...
A flash with lots of work needed, from start to finish, but with practice it wouldnt be that bad, good luck...
That was stupid real stupid
While it was kinda different it was still crap, the ending was stupid as well the boy punched the girl's head off then after it's came off she screamed, wtf, she's dead how come she screamed? The voices needed some work as well, the boy was squeaky and annoying and the dad was a computer sounding voice(not sure if it was actually a computer voice or not, it sounded weird). A real poor movie, I seem to be in a generous mood today, but this still gets a 0, my first of the day.
A short film about a park bench
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