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Don't expect to much from it since I'm still learning how to use flash. This movie has no sound, but I'm gonna work on that. If you find anything that you think would make it better, leave a reply. If you just flame me, you'll waste your time, I don't read lame replies. :D

***Update***

I dunno if you think it's any better, but I added sound to it.

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That was crap. The only good thing about the movie was the graphics. I'll be waiting for the sequel, maybe you might improve.

Hey not bad..

Besides no sound which you pointed out you are learning how to use flash,this was damn good..
I liked it..

Zeyix responds:

Ya, a little bit after I submitted it I found out that the sound wasn't hard to add at all, lol.

i can espect good things from you!

if this was you first one and the sound is coming too and you get better and better well, i just know i can espect good things of you

Zeyix responds:

Just after I submitted this, I started fiddling around with sound...It doesn't seem as hard as I thought, lol.

Wow.

I'm not going to "expect too much", as you put it, because it WAS one of your first movies and everything. But all the same, please try to form a coherent plot next time. The length...well, to be honest with you, I was going to complain about the brevity of this movie, but truthfully, so long as a movie has got some sort of plot, length really doesn't matter. Work on stories. Your animation was smooth, but, like I said, it's really the story that matters the most. Keep at it, kiddo.

Zeyix responds:

I know it was short/soundless just after sumbitting it I was trying to fiddle around with sounds and well...It's not as hard as I imagined. lol And yes, I'll work and making some sort of story line for it.

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1,893
Votes
14
Score
3.26 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jun 10, 2003
11:26 PM EDT