The first in the Vendetta series.
nah...
Was a good idea and all, but it was really annoying having to click instead of just sitting back and watching. The stabbing animation was good and looked fairly realistic, but when the guy got shot at the end... not so good in my opinion.
You should definatly make another one, the idea is there... but animate it and have sound. (Im not sayin anything about spelling cos youre already getting layed into for that).
I can help you.
Spell sitting, consider, what's, he's, maybe, robbing, wear, give me, your, already, couple, staring, alley, here, talent, they're, that's, huh, there's more, I just didn't feel like finding all.
What the hell
It was kinda funny, but the big beef I had was the spelling. Next time you make a movie with text, use a dictionary.
Tell me what words were spelled wrong so I can fix them.
Good debut
It was okay... It would have been a lot better with animation instead of clicking, and listening instead of reading...
I'll keep that in mind when Im working on episode 2.
Spelling PROBLEM
IT was o.k but thier was a lot of errors in this and you defently need to clean up you graphics.
I just fixed some of the errors, tell me is there are any more, and could you be more specific.