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This is a short comercial that me and my brother thought up. I think we all could use one of these.
That was alright, i liked the idea you used. The character designs were missing faces which was alittle off putting i like ppl with faces in my flash shorts, i know im a picky guy, but besides that this came out alright. The humour was well done and i liked the three variants to choose from, what may have made this better though would have been a voice over actor to read out the lines like a commercial, would have been far more easy to watch. Overall good graphics, and good idea made for a good flash.
(Hamy_jamy isn't even suppose to be here today)
Hey man nice idea. Could have ended up as a real funny cartoon. Unfortunately, it kinda sucked. Bit more practice and it could be real good. kinda. maybe. actually don't worry about making another 1.
that was pretty stupid and evan worst cause no sound
Nice idea. Would be better with the cheesey voice over, trying to sell the product. It should finish with a speedy message that says something like,
"we can not be held responsible for any injuries, loss of sight or deaths. Batteries not included."
overall is only 1 because of graphics.
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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