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Jun 1, 2003 | 7:07 PM EDT

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One Step: an awsome cartoon.

What more can I say?!



Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Not bad :D

So your animation was very basic with its movement styles, but all the same it still worked. It reminded me of something you would see on morning TV back in the day. The sound was a wee bit crackely, but all the same decent. The strongest part of this was the story, i dident expect the ending at all, although it was cute, but not drop dead funny. Keep working on your artwork and character development and you could easy be one of the better flash artists.


Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

I didnt think it was that funny

pretty good graphics and sound though


Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

well fun but...

Original idea,
although the drawing/animation is a little weak


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars


The way you made the character deaperate to get to his girlfriends house was really suspenseful. Im not trying to sound fruity or anything but the movie was great. Only critism was that it was very very mushy.

Halley responds:

heh heh... uh... I think you reviewed the wrong movie. Or else you're seeing much deeper into this then I ever intended. O_O


Rated 3 / 5 stars


You know there has to be something to it when the author calls their animation "awesome." Well, I would not go that far, but it was funny. I like your character designs, especially old greenie. The "ship" at the end was good. Nice use of basic shapes to keep the size down, and still be neat. Good work. You should bring back the characters, or at least one of them.