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were you scared? did it make you feel unconfortable? please tell me. i'm studying fear and found many ways to scare someone... those are some graphical triggers"" i wish it works.!!
3/5---Bad Graphics, Bad Ending, No Sound
Not scared, just apprehensive. You built it up to have a horrific ending, but never delivered. More sudden images would be nice ; ) And yes, sound would be good, too. A breath-scream for all the sudden images of the screaming face, dark music in the background, and screams of pain and horrible laughs throughout. Add color and make most of it dark. Lol, have fun.
1st thing you need to do i make a better flash for example
make scary music or use sounds better graphics and then it should get easyer to scare somone try things from nightmares see F E A R flash
or look on the F.E.A.R Game
I thought this was pretty interesting. While I watched I think I felt my heart pace speeding up. But that may have been because I read your description first. I could have been expecting myself to become a bit frightened or uncomfortable because you said you were hoping for people to feel that. Pretty cool though.
I really like how it turned out... I watched it, with the intention of being alarmed, and yes, it works. I'm not particularly phobic or impressionable, I just made sure I watched it without the 'oh I'm big and tough and can't be scared' mentality. I mean, sure, if I watched it with a scoffing outlook, it wouldn't have had an impact, but since I was just watching it and riding the emotional rollercoaster, I enjoyed the sensations of worry and fear it stirred. As for improvements, yes, sound would be a plus, but not necessary. And don't tell people the intention is to scare them, because then they'll start going 'pah, nothing scares me.' and the effect will be ruined. But don't take the other extreme and do what that one reviewer said (the whole rotten-com and scream sound fx), because that is lame and overdone. =)
(Graphics) Well drawn, in terms of getting the point across. Yes, I agree with the guy before me, STICK FIGURES?
(Style) Originality is worth kudos points.
(Sound) No sound... sniff...
(Violence) Some creepy imagery and threatening stuff...
(Overall) Good flash, work on it, but damn better than what I normally see.
I like the idea you were going for but i don't think stick men were the right medium also, if you ever re-do this add sound cos in scary films its the music thta makes me shit scared (not that that happens often)
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