Score: 4
"Nice Job but..."
date: November 29, 2004
I had no clue what they were saying, something about "Pigeons would be thugs dawg!". So that lowered your score. Not to mention the usage of the word fuck over and over. And you should've done two things with those guys:
1. Make them guys, not just a shadow.
2. The pigeon that lands on the right should've pecked out his brain, held it up, through it away, and laugh. Then the man keeps talking. It was funny though, but needs improvements on that stuff.