Score: 8
"This is well done."
date: July 7, 2009
I really like where this series is going.
Seeing as I caught sight of this series after your latest development "Gun & Sword", I was mostly going to see these to understand where your flash expertise developed.
After only 4 episodes (if I could call them that), you've obviously improved greatly, especially with the fluency of movement and overall scene contingency (I do hope I'm using the right word).
Though this episode draws me in specifically, it also has some improvements that could be made (and most likely have been made) in the future.
Some scenes were a bit drawn out.
I know this may have been the desired effect, but it could possibly lose the interest of viewers as they wait for the "super move" or the likes to actually go through with the hit.
Besides that and a few other points left unspoken, this was generally appealing and once again, well done.
Keep up the nice work.