Score: 10
"How'd you make it so small???"
date: January 11, 2003
Really good. Actually, Smeagol's bro found the ring, then Smeagol killed his brother, THEN took it into the mountains and got ugly. But hey, whateva floats ya boat!
Author's Response:
Yeah, but i was trying to make it not too long. Was he Smeagols brother? I thought he was just his freind.