Score: 3
"Ugh, please take out some stuff."
date: October 15, 2005
First off, like the last person said, there HAS to be a way to DIE.
Second, the more I played it, the more I realize that this is a fat waste of my time, later also getting boring. Take out some of the levels, make there be, like, five.
Third, the concept of the game itself is great, but shouldn't the pipes DO things, like WARP you?
Fourth, no variety? Make every level, apart from just the background and slight variation of walls, DIFFERENT. Add SOMETHING special for every level.
Fifth, The HELLO KITTY and ALEX CHIU people didn't fit in very well at all, and don't just add them in to be funny. I personally thought that Mario was all the game needed.
Sixth, when you jump, you should suspend in mid-air longer (in other words, take out some gravity).
Seventh, music? SOUNDS? WHERE ARE THEY?!
Eighth, when you jump, Mario should LOOK like he's jumping rather than simply jogging in mid-air, and it REALLY didn't look right. To a related matter, when he STOPS walking, make him stand rather than pause his walking.
Ninth, shouldn't the background move a LITTLE bit to add more depth into the movie? It didn't look the best when it just stood there in dead silence, watching you.
Tenth, why was there a PERSON for a background in Level 5? That's just a poor idea, needs fixing BY FAR.
Eleventh, the sprites for the ground and stuff should synch with the character and the background. The ground should look as big and pixely as Mario, and as well as that, fit with the theme going on in the background. If the background was snowy, the GROUND should be white. If the background was a CAVE, the GROUND should be dark and brown. etc.
Those are all my suggestions, I kind of hope you follow them for your next work.