Score: 7
"Hmmm......too short and not enough"
date: June 22, 2002
Hmmm, you did a really nice job setting up the scenery and setting for everthing to happen; only problem was that that was most of the whole flash. I don't wana rag on this too much, because this has a lot of potential <yoda scene=nice>, try and make more interactivity with the characters, because all this was was a foreshadow event that went too fast.
-Mage-