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Score: 6

"good but needs improvement"

by: IzaacBarratt

date: February 5, 2009

If you wonna get a good score on a collab you cant let shitty people join...
you need a better menu..something interactive...and not everybodys name before their parts..instead something at the top side indicated names...

Good luck on your next collab :3

Score: 8

"Not horrible,"

by: GloineFiodh

date: February 4, 2009

But not great. I was expecting a lot more for some reason. I really liked Saltypeach's and Flatthead's work. Flatthead perfected animation, where his drawing could use a little more work, and Saltypeach needs to make his backgrounds more detailed, and have more movement so characters don't seem so stiff. All in all, not the best collab, but it had it's moments. Keep practicing.

Score: 10

"awsome"

by: masterpdog

date: February 4, 2009

i love this Collab

Score: 4

"Needs improvement"

by: ChaosDragon227

date: February 4, 2009

It moved pretty smooth, but the art quality was pretty damn low. Also, one quick question: Where's the action?

Score: 8

"Crazy Sun!"

by: Camalleon

date: February 4, 2009

Man, the sun smashing the little creatures was freaking good! \o/

Score: 9

"Masbusa Tieb!"

by: Advertise-Play

date: February 4, 2009

Yalla! Ben adam! Salam!
Great movie!

Score: 6

"It's ok.."

by: specter9069

date: February 4, 2009

It needs to improve on the skil of your drawing and of movement. I see alot of "lag" like things in there which is like moving kind of awkward. try and improve on your drawing guys, for it will help you making a better flash

Score: 2

"it was alrite"

by: stevx

date: February 4, 2009

um coulda done better graphicaly some of the end ones where good some were just really bad so keep it up

Score: 3

"More than a little overrated."

by: XelrogTApocalypse

date: February 4, 2009

I'm expecting people to mark this review as 'useless' like Glitchhog down there, because God forbid I say ANYTHING bad about a flash animation. Apparently 'lol awsum movie' is a better-spent review than ours.

In my personal opinion, I agree with him. The artwork could have been done a lot better than it was. I thought Flatthead was the best of them artistically, but even that could have been improved. On a number of them it was difficult to distinguish what exactly was going on in the first place because so little time was spent on smooth animation - a prime example would be the energy shots. Or... missiles. Whatever they were intended to be, I can't tell.

I'll give it a 3 because I can't tell you how many worse animations there are on Newgrounds... the music was alright and the text effects/title were done well, but I wouldn't label it front page material. Overall, keep perfecting your art and I'm sure your next collab will be a hit.

(To be honest, I was kind of expecting a swordfight or two from a 'general' action collab. ;P)

Score: 3

"Ehhh..."

by: Glitchhog

date: February 4, 2009

It was alright, but most of the animation needs to be touched up a notch. Overall, not bad, but could have been much better.