Score: 9
"good, with room to improve"
date: March 4, 2009
Congrats on getting the first episode posted ImpendingRiot, the animation could use a little more smoothing, but nothing really to complain about. Tomar you rock! taking on all the roles in the episode was a great idea. wouldn't mind a bit more backstory as to why the king is with a group of mercenaries.
This was a really good submission, theres still room to improve upon it though. Excellent start for a series