Score: 2
"I'm sorry, man"
date: August 6, 2006
I understand you were just slowly capturing the last few seconds of the murder-it needed to capture the scenes from further back. some parts were so small it was confusing. or maybe actually have some spoken dialogue. i thought it was the clowns blood. there did need to be a concrete story. sure i know you think "the clown kills a kid" is the story. but it has none of the elements of a story other than premise. it needs so much more. That ending noise was painfully annoying. BUT, i gave 10 for style for only one small part. that balloon animation was very good. otherwise, this was awful. i kept waiting for something to happen, then far too abruptly the piece ends with the ending you would totally expect by the creepy tone set at the very beginning of the piece. you could have set a more happy fun-inspired setting, THEN give it that ending, it would have been more shocking. predictable. uninspired. and boring.
get a job.