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Score: 8

"Nice."

by: ZAchaPi

date: September 26, 2009

Was pretty well made, good music, It just needed better grapics. Might I recommend a sprite sheet?

Score: 0

"that sucks you suck take advice or dont submit"

by: zackfire17

date: December 13, 2008

(- 0.024) johnbish is saying he created a flash like this one his first try and you've had five flashes and more that were blammed and you still haven't improved
(maybe its because ur not taking help and advice hmmm?)

back to the review, ur character didnt move while they were fighting-
ok nvm im trying of trying to point out the things wrong with ur movie

continue to suck asshole

Score: 1

"you said mine was Ok but not great"

by: randomno12

date: December 5, 2008

now i say yours is crap

why?

why do you live?

Score: 0

"And you said mine needed improvement..."

by: johnbish

date: December 5, 2008

what do you mean you couldn't find sprite sheets? if you need some pm me
Suckish.
Everyone look at mine. This is like his 5th video
Mine was my first.

Score: 10

"Bloodbath!"

by: FavouriteBear

date: December 5, 2008

That was a massive improvement over your last madness submission, and I think the animation got better and better as the movie went along.
The scene with all the floating heads was a bit quick, but the one with coloured guys was nicely done and very funny.

Was that Resident Evil music at the end?

Score: 1

"Um.."

by: LordPain96

date: December 4, 2008

This gives madness a bad name. and what's with all these colors?
The graphics were suckish, but the music was pretty good. i give you
2/5, 1/10.

Score: 1

"Not good"

by: ins3cur3

date: December 4, 2008

The only good part of the video was the soundtrack. The gunshots were terrible the animation was bad this could use alot of work.

Score: 2

"Getting there"

by: bobcat64

date: December 4, 2008

Work on your effects, the circular gradient is cheesy. Also your projectile and energy-like images look poorly made. They look like they were hand drawn using the paint brush. I'm no expert animator or artist but I think the paint brush tool is more for touch-ups, anything made solely from it usually ends up looking like crap unless you are a "mouse-god" with the hands of a surgeon.

The transitions from some scenes aren't very clear and leads to a bit of disorientation. Namely from the outside to the inside. All I saw was him walking next to a building, didn't see him go inside, so when a room full of people just start dying it didn't make much sense. I'd add a scene of him walking into a doorway, maybe have him cap a few guys there too.

Develop some kind of storyline. It doesn't need to be a Nobel prize winner. Look at the Madness storyline, if you can even call it one. There needs to be some kind of direction, something to explain doing (from the title, I assume killing this ninja, but why? or at least make it more clear that is what he's going to do).
A small intro like you see in the Madness flicks would help with this, which leads me to the scene with the floating and warped heads just before . It was completely random and appeared to serve no purpose. That said it wasn't terribly bad for the 0.5 seconds I saw of it, but it needs more 'coolness'. I'd take it out completely, but save it for something else like a hallucination or as I mentioned: an intro.