Score: 3
"Sorry.. didn't like it.."
date: December 4, 2008
The art was decent, but the story was told way way WAY too slow. You made the connection of Mcain providing over-drilling and multiple construction of Nuclear power as something bad, and then went 50 years into the future... k... WHY?!?!? Why was a dustbowl shown? Did the consumption of the oil reserves BAKE THE WORLD?!?
Also, Natural gas and crude oil are two VERY different things.
You need to work on your storytelling skills. Pauses are good in moderation, but you need to pick up the pace about 200%. Keep in mind that the person watching the story does not see what is in your head, you need to describe it. This was titled about McCain, but was actually an anti-drilling piece. PRetty boring one at that.
December 4, 2008
Author's Response:
HAHA! no.. damnit, didn't you read my comments? this is for a class. My whole point of this animation was to kill lots of time. thats why its so slow. The dustbowl look.. I just threw that in there for fun. I honestly don't care for politics, but this was for my class. haha!