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Score: 3

"better"

by: monkeybrains1989

date: December 3, 2008

better than the first for sure
but the plot could use a little more substance, even if it is i realize the absurd super biased man
vocal quality good but could improve

Score: 8

"Good aside from animation"

by: mysticmonkey2

date: December 3, 2008

It was funny enough, but you still need to work on the animation, I loved the scene with the bank manajor.

Score: 4

"its ok"

by: extension123

date: December 3, 2008

its better than the other one and you can notice you spent a lot of work on this....one problem if you were going for a main plot you kinda blew it.....but it's crazy lack of a real plot made it somewhat funny.....if you keep at it im sure it will be better :)

Score: 3

"Nobody can deny"

by: poonut

date: December 3, 2008

You tried. what you need to do is refine your audio, and the people who are doing your voices, the animation was rough and i really didn't know where you were going with your story. But it looks like you spent time on it, keep trying and i am sure you;ll get it.

Score: 6

"IT WAS OK"

by: Gamer7256

date: December 3, 2008

It was ok

Score: 0

"Boring"

by: TetrisClock

date: December 3, 2008

This is boring, and the audio/video didn't hold up.