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Score: 4

"Needs more thought..."

by: vestpuzzle

date: December 4, 2008

time and this game has quite a bit of glitches. Anyhow, for your first game, I've seen and played much worse. With a little time and program execution, you're going to make a fine "author". Good luck on your next project; I'm sure you'll do a fine job.............vp

Score: 5

"lol i had 0 health and didnt die"

by: H00N

date: December 3, 2008

you should REALLY REALLY finish and perfect this game man! lots of potential.
one thing that would be cool is if you would make it so the badguys didnt die the same way everytime.

Score: 4

"what???"

by: opie353

date: December 3, 2008

nice try, but there's definitely a few bugs. the main one is that if a guy pops up and you kill him, you can make him come back by backing up and walking forward again... and then it wouldnt let me through the one door in the room w/ the chick and bulletholes pretending to move/jump around... blah blah blah. try again.

Score: 3

"Very bad"

by: Clbull

date: December 3, 2008

I appreciate your efforts to make a on rails first person shooter-like game, but this is just ridden with bugs.

The graphics are not that good. Some of the enemies reset when you move 1 step back and 1 steo forward, and even then, some areas are inaccessible.

Also, firing where you're aiming at sucks, and you CANNOT die, despite being at 0 health.

If the inaccessibility at the end of the second room is due to the fact that its a demo, then thats understandable, but it would then be a short demo with no ending, bugs and a lack of storyline.

Score: 3

"Not a completely hopeless effort."

by: Robzor238

date: December 3, 2008

Good try. Music and sounds were half-decent. But calling it an FPS is a little bit reaching. The fact that you cannot progress beyond a certain point, end of the demo perhaps, but not explained, and that you can't die did somewhat limit the appeal.
Overall, not a bad attempt, but I think you've a fair bit to learn yet.

Score: 5

"ummmm"

by: Faygohero

date: December 3, 2008

it has some good points, could be great. you can't use the arrow keys and the mouse at the same time, well, at least not me, i'm use to WADS and mouse.

Score: 5

"Nice demo"

by: El-Syd

date: December 3, 2008

But, before you release the game, you need to fix some things especially regarding bullet holes, first, you should allow the previous holes to stay, rather than only allowing 1 hole at a time, secondly, the bulletholes should NOT move with you or the camera they should remain fixed in their positions other than that nice looking game so far.

Score: 7

"well.."

by: Dammy

date: December 3, 2008

is there a bug?!?! because I have a 0 at life strength,but they can kill me...

Score: 7

"incomplete with some bugs but it's ok"

by: fauzsto

date: December 3, 2008

you can't die and at the part that there's a girl you can't advance more but its a good game lokking forward for the game