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Score: 7

"Keep practicing"

by: meiokg

date: October 1, 2009

You realy improved since the first 1, but i thing you should try to improve some things. Mainly shadow/light effects, human anatomy, proportion and gender differences. You have some skill there and it would be a waste not use it. I suggest you find something to copy human positions, like a wooden doll (they are realy usefull sometimes!) Everything else made it worth my time ;)

Score: 8

"Better!"

by: Feelinfinenumbernine

date: September 29, 2009

Your animation has improved a lot from the first video. Your sync with the lip's movement is really good too. I figure that's one of the tough parts of these vids, no?
Keep animating, I think this series has a lot of heart. Plus your sense of humor is great.

Score: 5

"Fable the Lost Chapters(long review)"

by: TheSonicKid101

date: May 17, 2009

i'm really sorry, but hell this look just like that game(well in part one and 2)
first of, in fable the lost chapters, you are a boy who yes helps his dad and all that(same) and saw his parents die in front of his eyes(more same) and was taken in by the heroes' guild (more same but just the name is different) and then his first weapon given is a dam stick(EXADCTLY THE SAME)! and he has a friend he trains with till he grews up(same excepts its a girl and thats it) and all disctricts on this planet is seperated,AND heroes(royal guards) can have quests too.and the only different are is what happens AFTER the first part and there are buidlings, flying cars, a king, ect.

and one more thing, this is very confusing, you're buildings, cafeteria, elevators, even the dam food are like regular today, but your weapons and armor are dam swords and steel armor which is like 1400s? and then the dam flying cars which is like what time 2300????? you mixed dam time together and make it confusing, and ok, yes the fighting is a bit good, but could be better, i mean look up Sonic:Nazo Unleashed, the fighting in that is wayyy much better and yet he has less ratings than your stupid thing

Score: 10

"Oh, Ray >-<"

by: Smexy-Kitten

date: May 7, 2009

He cracks me up XD Your animation is still a little wierd, but you'll get better :3

Score: 10

"Awesome"

by: Roxasownz666

date: January 15, 2009

This, like the others in the series so far is just excellent. The animation was great, the characters and story were both great, and the voices and music were amazing. I can't wait for Chapter four =]

Score: 10

"sweet"

by: Kensuke2548

date: December 7, 2008

nice i want a hover thing for christmas please?

Score: 0

"not bad"

by: D-J-S

date: December 6, 2008

you did pretty good but your animation was abit choppy...

Score: 7

"a seven"

by: Sandbagger

date: December 6, 2008

it was ok i just did not enjoy just could not
ill give u this though wen they fought it made me laugh like hell cuz they look funny

Score: 10

"cool"

by: kingchedda

date: December 6, 2008

good job

Score: 10

"Congrrats on Frontpage"

by: GATOONA

date: December 6, 2008

I knew you could do it buddy. See, all those years mentoring you paid off, didn't it.